Also, need to make sure the story isn't cliché. Maybe add specific details to make her character unique. What's her motivation? Maybe she has a passion, like photography or street art. Financial struggles could force her to be resourceful.
I need to figure out the genre. Since "broke amateurs" is part of it, maybe it's about overcoming adversity. Perhaps Lori is an artist or trying to make it in a competitive field. Maybe something like art school, or a creative endeavor where she has to hustle. broke amateurs lori new
And somewhere, in a gallery tucked along the Southside waterfront, her original "Threads of the City" hung, its stitches humming with stories no amount of money could buy. Also, need to make sure the story isn't cliché